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CoryD
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Hawk

Postby CoryD » 22 Oct 2017, 14:55

Hawk

Sharp-eyed and noble
On the wind, soaring higher
Beautiful and free


( I enjoy haiku, they're fairly simple and meeting the syllable count can be fun and challenging. Thanks for reading mine!)

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Re: Hawk

Postby ShadowCat » 23 Oct 2017, 08:23

:applause: :tiphat:
Clean and invocative.... Love it!
Three sounds one should treasure:
the whisper of the wind through the leaves
the songs of one's heart
the callings of the universe

BS13 I BS13 II LI13 SB13 IL14 LI14 SB14 BS15 LI 15
Sacred spaces and places

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Re: Hawk

Postby CoryD » 25 Oct 2017, 23:59

Thank you, ShadowCat!


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